Pivoting...

I'm in the Entrepreneurship program as many of you know are aware. This semester I have a peculiar class on Tuesdays and Thursdays called "BUSINESS MODEL" and the purpose of the class is to create a start-up business. Well my business is "Spanish Tutoring." The scary part of the class is the "BUSINESS COMPETITION" which purpose within is to submit and present a business model.
The three aspects that will be observed in the competition are"

• Pitch (steps for a great pitch: What is the problem?, How big?, What is the solution?, (here is where the idea first appears) and Why you? (have a compelling reason, story, credentials)
• Business Model
• and something else I do not remember...(next blog entry)

This is my Pich and following it there is feedback from fellowshipping.

My pitch

I'm Liliana Peralta and my business is "Spanish tutoring"
in a face to face study session where
questions are asked,
concepts expanded,
and speaking encouraged
in order to master Spanish in its
grammar, comprehension, and communication.

Feedback given in class:

Introduce the problem I am solving.
Mention that learning another language is hard and help is essential to success

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